

Laurence Smith
"Nice job man =]
I think the Idea of the music video is good but really need some instruemntal
perforamnce.Even though the angles and footage you got of the performer were good
it got a bit boring after a while. Also could of done with a bit more tighter editing
near the beginning with maybe a few more fade in and other effect around the start.
last half of it is awesome but if people get bored before the end there not going to
see the end, good lip syncing aswell
over all great video just needed that little bit extra really
hope this feedback does you some good =]"
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Bethany Estelle
Beth Walsh
Cinnamon Francis-Burnett
Although saying that there were a fair few things that could have been improved;
-The movements of the female in the video weren't very convincing - the head shaking could have looked alot better and the body movement could have been stronger.-
-Facial expressions could have been worked on too but yeah...-
-Could do with a few more effects over the main section of the actaul video - it was slightly "plain" in a sense but maybe you wanted that effect I don't know-... See More
-Opening shot could have been done a bit better - the movement was a bit dodgy compared to the female walking but that's my opinion-
I don't really wanna go on because I don't wanna upset/piss people off =/ But yeah...thats my opinion on the shot = over-all it's good, could do with some work - but yeah xxx
Nathan Ives
Good job on the lip syncing, all in time
Uhhh...yeah heavy performancely based and did a good job with it, can't really comment on any narrative points though.
Think it used many of Goodwin's points (Selling artist, ect)
Luke Slater
I really like the bit with the leaves towards the end, more of that?
The girl seems a bit insincere when she's doing the head-banging/rocking thing.
Also personally I didn't get a firm feel for a concept within the song, she seems to be getting a bit emotional kinda thing (silence is golden) but what's with the forest and graffiti? Maybe it's a scene kid thing...... See More
You have a bit of funny dubbing on 'speak' right before 2:00