This is some of the feedback that we got from putting our music video on Facebook:
Bethany Estelle
Daniel Andre-pasquierBethany Estelle
awesomee maan (: ♥
Beth Walsh
And good effects at the end : )
Cinnamon Francis-Burnett
Nathan Ives
Beth Walsh
And good effects at the end : )
Cinnamon Francis-Burnett
Ok well lets see - I like the general idea of the video. The shots used were pretty good - good transitions and movements from each shot. Good choice of music - I wouldn't have chosen it but yeah... Liked that.
Although saying that there were a fair few things that could have been improved;
-The movements of the female in the video weren't very convincing - the head shaking could have looked alot better and the body movement could have been stronger.-
-Facial expressions could have been worked on too but yeah...-
-Could do with a few more effects over the main section of the actaul video - it was slightly "plain" in a sense but maybe you wanted that effect I don't know-... See More
-Opening shot could have been done a bit better - the movement was a bit dodgy compared to the female walking but that's my opinion-
I don't really wanna go on because I don't wanna upset/piss people off =/ But yeah...thats my opinion on the shot = over-all it's good, could do with some work - but yeah xxx
Although saying that there were a fair few things that could have been improved;
-The movements of the female in the video weren't very convincing - the head shaking could have looked alot better and the body movement could have been stronger.-
-Facial expressions could have been worked on too but yeah...-
-Could do with a few more effects over the main section of the actaul video - it was slightly "plain" in a sense but maybe you wanted that effect I don't know-... See More
-Opening shot could have been done a bit better - the movement was a bit dodgy compared to the female walking but that's my opinion-
I don't really wanna go on because I don't wanna upset/piss people off =/ But yeah...thats my opinion on the shot = over-all it's good, could do with some work - but yeah xxx
Nathan Ives
Nice work. Good choice of locations and other pretty cool Mise-en-scene.
Good job on the lip syncing, all in time
Uhhh...yeah heavy performancely based and did a good job with it, can't really comment on any narrative points though.
Think it used many of Goodwin's points (Selling artist, ect)
Luke Slater
I really like the bit with the leaves towards the end, more of that?
The girl seems a bit insincere when she's doing the head-banging/rocking thing.
Also personally I didn't get a firm feel for a concept within the song, she seems to be getting a bit emotional kinda thing (silence is golden) but what's with the forest and graffiti? Maybe it's a scene kid thing...... See More
You have a bit of funny dubbing on 'speak' right before 2:00
Good job on the lip syncing, all in time
Uhhh...yeah heavy performancely based and did a good job with it, can't really comment on any narrative points though.
Think it used many of Goodwin's points (Selling artist, ect)
Luke Slater
I really like the bit with the leaves towards the end, more of that?
The girl seems a bit insincere when she's doing the head-banging/rocking thing.
Also personally I didn't get a firm feel for a concept within the song, she seems to be getting a bit emotional kinda thing (silence is golden) but what's with the forest and graffiti? Maybe it's a scene kid thing...... See More
You have a bit of funny dubbing on 'speak' right before 2:00
LOVING THE VIDEO well done team, you did a great job, from the looks of thing you put some blood sweat and tears to get this down right.
oh and seriously is this women part of you media group, because she is stunning!
Christopher Gregory Saunders
oh and seriously is this women part of you media group, because she is stunning!
Christopher Gregory Saunders
this is really good. music and video all in time. simple but not too simple if u get what i mean (makes it good). maybe a little stiff with the acting in some places but can soon sort that out. overall i would say that theres not much to do to it. just little bits and then it will be all good. loved the location of it all. looking foward to seeing your next bit of work :)
Laurence Smith
"Nice job man =]
I think the Idea of the music video is good but really need some instruemntal
perforamnce.Even though the angles and footage you got of the performer were good
it got a bit boring after a while. Also could of done with a bit more tighter editing
near the beginning with maybe a few more fade in and other effect around the start.
last half of it is awesome but if people get bored before the end there not going to
see the end, good lip syncing aswell
over all great video just needed that little bit extra really
hope this feedback does you some good =]"
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